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Weekly Review: Essays are Coming (Extra Credit)
Weekly Review The reading for me went great this week. I really enjoyed both of the readings. Tartuffe was probably my favorite because it had a lot of drama, which is so fun for me. I did like The Song of Ch’un-Hyang but it made me a sad when she was beaten so badly. I loved Ch’un-Hyangs passion though; the love for her husband was unconditional. They never made me feel bored or felt like it was dragging on which is always good! I’m sure all the readings will interest me. My best writing this week was probably in this class with my reading notes. I took a lot of time to make sure my notes were nicely written so I would be able to look at them in the future and be able to understand the reading. A good strategy for me is to pause in the reading and take notes as I go along, so I know exactly what I was thinking in that moment. And how my feelings change throughout the story. A lot of peoples work has been standing out to me, we have a lot of great writers in t...
Hello Megan, good job on the first submission of project three. I liked the amount of information you delivered for both of the stories. I also like that you put in bold the topic of your project. When I was reading your project it was very easy and enjoyable to read. You did a nice job connecting the quotes to the topic. In addition, you explained the quotes and overall story well. I think if you add these two things this project will be even better than it already is. First, I would suggest maybe add a short paragraph that compares why both of the stories are similar and/or not similar. It will help show us the reader that there is a reason as to why both stories were chosen rather than just list them and explain them. Second, a conclusion will look good at the end of your project but if you just tie the stories together then even that would work as a good way of ending the project in my opinion but it's up to you. Great job on the first submission I really liked the amount if detail you put in. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteMegan, Great job on your project. You did a great job analyzing “A Rooms of Ones Own”, as well as making sure you let us know the author’s intent. You used great quotes from the text to support your thesis. My suggestion will be to write your prompt into your introduction without stating it separate. For example, “I will be exploring the impact gender discrimination in the story of “A Rooms of Ones Own.” You did a great job also analyzing the “Notes of A Native Son”, however, my only suggestion is to perhaps focus on one piece of literature and since you have a great deal of text for “A Rooms of Ones Own” maybe focus and expound more this piece. If you want to continue to analyze both two pieces of literature, I suggest some how introducing that in your thesis and tie the two stories together by either comparing or contrasting them. Other than that great job and can’t wait to read final revision.
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ReplyDeleteGood work on your project! You discussed about both works very well and it was interesting to see how a white female and a black male are both equally disadvantaged despite one being white and the other being a male and how they are disadvantaged by one being female and the other being black. I think that the one thing you should add to your project is probably a paragraph connecting the two works, comparing and contrasting them perhaps? Besides that, I think everything else was great, from the structure of the project to having the prompt at the beginning so that we already know what you will be discussing about. Great Work!