Feedback Thoughts

-
I think feedback thoughts are very important. They can help you a lot when writing. I remember the first time I received bad feedback was in the 9th grade, it was my english teacher. She told me that I was really unorganized in my writing. I didn't know what she meant at first but after reading my own paper I knew she meant that I go all over the place. I go from thought to thought so quickly without splitting up the paragraphs. I still work on it to this day. It's something that I have always been cautious about.

I've gotten a lot of positive feedback, but they don't stick with you like the negative ones. For every good compliment there is always that one negative one that you can't forget.

This is why I think feedback is important. It has help me in my writing. I know when I receive good feedback I am doing something write and when I get bad feedback, I know its something I can work on to improve.

Comments

Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

Weekly Review: Essays are Coming (Extra Credit)

-
Weekly Review The reading for me went great this week. I really enjoyed both of the readings. Tartuffe was probably my favorite because it had a lot of drama, which is so fun for me. I did like The Song of Ch’un-Hyang but it made me a sad when she was beaten so badly. I loved Ch’un-Hyangs passion though; the love for her husband was unconditional. They never made me feel bored or felt like it was dragging on which is always good! I’m sure all the readings will interest me. My best writing this week was probably in this class with my reading notes. I took a lot of time to make sure my notes were nicely written so I would be able to look at them in the future and be able to understand the reading. A good strategy for me is to pause in the reading and take notes as I go along, so I know exactly what I was thinking in that moment. And how my feelings change throughout the story. A lot of peoples work has been standing out to me, we have a lot of great writers in t...
Read more

Week 3, Analysis

-
Week 3 Analysis  - Tartuffe Themes In this story we see multiple themes. Some of them are Hypocrisy, Love, Family and Religion. I saw these through out the whole reading. Hypocrisy is the main theme for me. We saw it a lot. Every one called Tartuffe a hypocrite because they thought he acted pure and godly but they said it was all fake. They also called him a hypocrite because he had a "following" but was lusting after another mans wife. This is the definition of a hypocrite, going against your own words. We also see Love. At first Orgon had such a strong brotherly love for Tartuffe. He even went against his family to give Tartuffe the deed to their property. He also tried to force his daughter into marriage with Tartuffe. I believe Orgon has a big heart and it shows. He wants to see the good in Tartuffe when every one was rooting against him. We also know thatTartuffe has a fascination for Orgon's Wife, Elmire which could be considered to be under this theme.  Famil...
Read more

Reading Notes | Part B | Week 14

-
Leopold Sedar Senghor Senghor was a poet, a founder of the Negritude movement, and the first president of independent Senegal. (676). Senghor was born in Joal, a small fishing village in the Sine-Saloum basin in west-central Senegal. The first African American student to pass the highly competitive examination for the agregation,  he was qualified a pursue a career in the French educational system. Was drafted into the French Army as an officer in 1939, he was taken as a prisoner by the Germans in 1940 and wasn't released until two years later on medical grounds that were confined to Paris. He continued to teach and in 1944 he was appointed professor of African languages at the Ecole Nationale de la france d'Outre-Mer. (676) In 1946 was his first election with the French Constituent Assembly as a deputy for Senegal, Senghor had launched his political career. In 1956, Senghor's collection Ethiopiques represented a new direction in his poetry, one less overtly related t...
Read more